Awe, this was so sad and so well written. I loved it.

Pretty piece of poetry/prose. I'm not sure which it is, but it seems like a rhyming poem in a paragraph. I liked your word use, and i can tell that you wrote this from your heart. Great write dear, Keep on penning!

5/5
~Stephen White

BTW: "what could've been." Should be "and what could've been."

Very good, for one of your first poems, 5/5 and I can't wait to see more of your poems ^_^