Loser

by Katie Marie   Apr 12, 2004


I know a girl who isn't like any one I've ever known before. She always is being laughed at, laughed at because she isn't cool. She always tries so hard to fit in, but no one at school will take her in. She doesn't want to be popular, she doesn't even care. All she ever wanted was to have a friend who really did care. But now it's too late, for she has committed suicide. She has done this terrible act because in her heart she believed that no one cared about her. But that isn't true there was some one who cared, someone just like her. Who was she? Well just another loser.

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  • 18 years ago

    by amelia

    Its very rude comment from emily
    this poem is written in pain
    why cant she see that ?

  • 20 years ago

    by Aken Sol

    Took you all long enough to catch onto what she was writing about. I'm sorry about your friend... i know how you feel. I write to ease that pain. Um... i like your poem

  • 20 years ago

    by heather

    first of all you arnt a loser and your poem was awsome. I just got mad at what you wrote about me. I wasnt trying to be rude or anything I just was very very mad at what you wrote. You do have talent and it shows all right by your poem so if you can forgive me I would like it. luv Heather

  • 20 years ago

    by heather

    hey kate i am sorry about what i wrote i was mad didnt read it right and ggot mad. if you want to talk e amil me at princess13060@yahoo.com sorry

  • 20 years ago

    by Emily Strickland

    Oh And Just To Let You Know...It Sounds A Bit Childish