Explosions Of Hatred

by Jessica   Apr 13, 2007


Tears streaming over unwashed skin,
Insults thrown across blurry screens,
Unexplained silences creating fury,
Life portrayed by two adoring teens.

Struggles occur in making things clear,
Hidden words obstruct desired truths,
Overpowered egos refuse to back down.
Fighting to the death, are these two youths.

Enclosed love surges through passionate veins
Swiftly transformed into fervent rage as it flows
Yearning concealed within messages of madness
In explosions of hatred, love inside them grows..

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  • 17 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    Aah. Once again, very bittersweet. It was confusing at times and the flow was a little off, but nothing too bad.

    5.5
    :]

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Awww your poems are really good! I loved this one! it was one of the best I've read today!

  • 17 years ago

    by Katie

    This is pretty good. Great use of vocabulary. :]

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    This poem had a very nice flow and rhyme scheme. An inspirational love poem! Shows that hanging on to the one you love is worth it, and that you can never really hate the one you love.

  • 17 years ago

    by Romancing the Darker Side

    Wow. Very powerful, quite deep, and a nicely penned poem. A few of the lines left me a bit confused, but it was beautiful nonetheless.

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