Dying on the Ocean Floor

by The Angel of Secrets   Apr 13, 2007


An endless scream, howls in the night,
the waves of the ocean beats.
Toward the deck, she runs in fright,
Before his task completes.

She is soaking in a small white dress,
ripped by a hungry knife.
She can keep running, but without success,
There is no chance of life.

She can hear him come, coming near,
his steps running fast.
She can feel the sweat, tight and clear,
This will no longer last.

The boat is coming to an end,
She has no where to go.
She is tired and weak, she can't defend,
What he does not know.

She puts her hands around her waist,
protects the unborn boy.
He does not know what he chased,
What he is about to destroy.

He's coming closer, now he's here,
she can feel his smelly breath.
She can feel the unmistaken feeling of fear,
This is their ending death.

He takes her arms, and kiss her lips,
whisper gently "Goodbye".
He lifts her up, around her hips,
and says "This is your time to die."

She can't protest and fakes a smile,
"It's not worth it anymore."
She flies just for a little while,
Before dying on the ocean floor.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Nix

    Poem is so dark and sad. I liked the lest stanza. It isn't best of yours but it is a good one.

  • 17 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Again another fantastic poem. i love your style and the flow was exellent. Keep writin :D

    xxx alex xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by isabel

    This really took my breath away...it's just amazing, absolutely amazing...every single aspect of this poem is fantastic...
    You have a lot of talent...
    Keep on writing...

    *isabel*

  • 17 years ago

    by Tammie

    Wow! This is a superb poem you have here hun! The story behind it all is really creative and unique. The flow perfect, as well as the rhyming. Your vocab is well chosen, it really suits this piece. Very talented you are. =] Very well done on this. 5/5

    Tammie xo

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