Wow! This is a superb poem you have here hun! The story behind it all is really creative and unique. The flow perfect, as well as the rhyming. Your vocab is well chosen, it really suits this piece. Very talented you are. =] Very well done on this. 5/5

Tammie xo

This really took my breath away...it's just amazing, absolutely amazing...every single aspect of this poem is fantastic...
You have a lot of talent...
Keep on writing...

*isabel*

Again another fantastic poem. i love your style and the flow was exellent. Keep writin :D

xxx alex xxx

Poem is so dark and sad. I liked the lest stanza. It isn't best of yours but it is a good one.