I really was impressed with the bridging in the poem. You are very coherent and you piece it together. A very good epitaph for love.

Very well done!
I really like the creativity in your poem.
You had a really nice flow.
Didn't seem to have anything wrong.
God bless 5/5
<3tayy

I'm pretty sure most people have things about there past that bother them, I know I do. It's hard to get these thoughts to vanish from our minds, we just have to stay strong and live with what we have. Excellent job 5/5