I like the fact that you have faith, alot of people have abandoned that very thing in the present time.

"God gave me wings"

I particularily liked this line because I know that there comes a time in life where we all feel we are ready to spread our wings and fly. Great write :]

All the best, Bonnie
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I like it i like how you say god but you dont really talk about religon because you dont want to make people feel uncomptfortable
i like the last line it really ties the whole thing together and makes the reader aww excellent you get it