Is this all there is in life?

by TotaMariee   Apr 13, 2007


Falling, Falling,no one to catch me

Breaking, Breaking ,trying to hold myself together

Confusion, whats real, whats not?

Lies, Lies,suffocating in my thoughts

Rejection, Myself is not good enough

tears, tears, my eyes have become stained and bloody

Regret, what has been done, cannot be erased

Love, A love that can never be, abuses my heart, daily

Happiness, hiding behind a smile,lying to myself

Anger, uncontrolled venom, words like a knife in the heart

Depression, Razors to the skin,
nothing is more painful, than how I'm feeling

Life, is this it?

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  • 17 years ago

    by lacey

    Awwwww i like this poem very good i feel the same lol =)

  • 17 years ago

    by Lauren Waszkiewicz

    Overall. This was good.

    =]

    Few things:

    reals - real
    lieing- lying
    (SPELLCHECKER! =])

    i think you need some more punctuation thoughout this poem. like ...'s and commas in the begining. and there should be spaces after the commas. =]

    get rid of the double spacing!!! ahh that is so annoying!! (sorry but its true!)

    but overalli really liked this poem. i feel teh same way soo much. i want to eff myself up and die..

    but things get better. remember that. keep your chin up. =]

    x.o Lola

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