This poem was deep yet sweet at the same time and thats why I liked it.

"Thoughts only provoke my lust for you
And smiles mask what lay wake
Let truth be told that my love for you
Is deeper than even the deepest lake"

This was a really good stanza. It sounds like this is true love. It really shows a 'deep yearning affection' you have for this person.

Take care :]
Bonnie
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