You did a good job! i like it

I loved this style in poetry ive done a few myself and i find them to be really great and fun to write. As far as ive seen you've used all the syllables which is great. This poems really sweet and cute. Liked it alot well done~mel

Very good for a short poem I probably cant even make it sound that good... good job and keepit up !! 5/5

I love this format. I can never do a single one though.
But this is fab!
The concept you picked is something a lot of people can relate to. Waiting for the love of thier life to make an appearance..
Well done
5/5
*Gem*

I liked it I just dont think the rhythm or anything as right and I know with the syllaols its hard but nice job anyways!

I loved this!
having attempted Etheree's in the past, I know how hard they can be, but you made it look effortless with this one.
A wonderful write!

P.S I commented I need you a while back, maybe you have another you'd like me to do?

Perfect example of a Etheree. You did an awesome job. I loved this poem and the meaning I got from reading it. Keep up the good work. 5/5

Wow, that one was really sweet, shows how much you really care about a person. Very beautifully written. You kept the scheme going. I've tried this one before, I didn't do a good job, so I never posted it! Good job!