Bluish-Green Eyes (revised for the guy its about)

by ashley   Apr 13, 2007


In a world so bright
I think its going alright
Then someone turns out the light
Darkness encompasses
And i feel as lost as can be
Then i see you standing there
Holding my hand
Helping me to stand
On my own two feet
In the face of defeat
I look into your bluish-green eyes
Eyes that could never be mean or tell me lies
I see patience and kindness
Helping to guide me through my temporary blindness
I see happiness and fun
And love that is warm like the sun
I hear your deep voice telling me i'll be fine
Even when i begin to whine; that i dont see how
But you still believe
Because only you see
The real person I am
Through your bluish-green eyes

***ps. hes going to try to turn this into a song and he really liked the poem**
Please comment if you like this version better.

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