OH yeah this poem was awsome, oh you made my day, niceness you tell em dont let those idiots bring you down WHOOP NIce poem the first paragraph was great awsome flow maybe u could read one of mine oh my gosh you just made my favorites list.

One can feel the emotions while reading the poem, its well written.

Take care
chavii.

I love how you have repeated the title thru out the poem. really brought out a deeper meaning.

5/5 David