by Gothic Girl in Pain Apr 14, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
My heart is sad and so am I. It hurts so much that it pains me to look into your eyes. To look into your eyes, is like being in a dream. And it just brings |
For I know what I would say, would not |
by BlAcK RoSe
Need to flow better in the middle but a very good write well done |
Very nice structure i know how you feel, Im going through the same thing. But you might want the middle to flow a little better, from the heart i loved it 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine. |