Your poem is sooo detailed and yet soo deep .. that is what I love about it.. this poem is soo touching.. when I first saw you rlong poem I was like oh great.. but this poem made it worthwhile good job i loved it!! 5/5

OKAY I HONESTLY BROKE DOWN AND CRIED FOR YOU...THIS POEM BLEW ME AWAY!!! GREAT WORK...TRULY AMAZING=)

This is your best poem yet, its so sad but very good, perfectly put together, love the flow, i give this poem a 5/5!!! by the way the collab poem is great!!!

Sweetie, wow.
I have tears in my eyes.. =[ That was heartbreaking & I hope that it isn't true. To me, this has got to be your best poem ever. The flow was good, the emotions were PERFECT, and overall, it was just perfect. I loved it, please keep writing! =] 5/5

Stephanie Lynn .+.

Aweh that was amazing! I mean it, don't you dare think otherwise haha. I hope this isn't a true story cuz it broke my heart not knowing if it was or not but if it was than wow, this is truly breathtaking...you are very talented and I will keep saying that over and over again cuz it's true haha.

"He's gone. I'm sorry. There was nothing we could do,
But he left a note and it's written for you."

^^ Those lines actually gave me the shivers, and then as I read the other quotations you had, I kept getting them. The way you involved the quotations into the poem really helped it to be what it is. You'r amazing lol.

heartchuu.

A nice read, unfortunately true for many people... I love how you told the story. You used pretty vocabulary and it had a great flow. Nice work :).

Wow... Ciao, you really captured the emotion with this one!! It's brilliant!! Made me start to tear up!! You really seem to have a way of writing things that makes the reader believe you've experienced it, even if you haven't... wonderful write 5/5 for sure

Much Love,
.:Danielle:.