Another Poem for your Hazel Eyes

by Goran Rahim   Apr 14, 2007


Oh god,
What is happening to me?
My pen is not stopping,
Forcing me to
Write
Poems after poems
All dedicated to you.

The pen is doing this
Because it has
Support of my heart
As my feelings are so true.

My heart wants to
Have your smile forever
And
Keep gazing at your hazel eyes.

Oh dear,
How many poems for those hazel eyes?
Now my readers are
Tired of that word,
From them,
I heard a lot of goodbyes.
Yet
I have told them
I will keep saying it
As seeing those
Hazel eyes,
In my darkest moments
They are like the sunrise.

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  • 16 years ago

    by ForeverAndADay

    I know this is one of your older poems but i love it as well as the other hazel eyes poems u wrote. I can relate cuz the love of my life has hazel eyes and i have alot of poems that has that in there. And people who read them tell me they're tired of hearin about his eyes. Who cares. Keep up the good work i love it,

  • 17 years ago

    by Joy

    I loved the words you used and they fit so perfectly.

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    I loved how you added a twist of rhyme to this poem so it wasn't overwhelming but it worked...I really enjoyed how you wrote about the pen like it had it's own mind and you weren't telling it what to do nice job I loved it!

  • 17 years ago

    by Espoirfailed

    I think this poem is so beautiful, however i like how it is not "shakespeare" beautiful with hyperbole and exaggerated descriptions, i liked the simplicity, honesty and above all humour you contained within this poem, xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Startle Me

    Oh my gawsh.
    First of
    This has no flow.
    But you know what?
    I EFFING LOVE IT!
    I don't know why...
    The words are not perfect.
    The flow is weak.
    And yet.
    I like it.
    I don't know why.
    5/5

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