by Sydney Apr 14, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
They say love is sweet, |
Very good and very understandable =) Doesn't it suck that something as wonderful as love can hurt so dang bad? =P |
by Miu
Aww little sad but the lines where great had very interesting thoughts in it:) Aww and like the flow doesn't always matter so much.You are just expressing your feelings :) Keep up the great work! |
by Sweet lig
Gosh! this one is my favorite! i like all the lines and words u put in this poet! the flow wasnt good but i love how u write its ok w/me and it doenst matter atleast u can express well! i give u 5/5 |
by Kaila
Awww this is beautifully written you did a great job!! but the flow needs some work |