Awww this is beautifully written you did a great job!! but the flow needs some work

Gosh! this one is my favorite! i like all the lines and words u put in this poet! the flow wasnt good but i love how u write its ok w/me and it doenst matter atleast u can express well! i give u 5/5

Aww little sad but the lines where great had very interesting thoughts in it:) Aww and like the flow doesn't always matter so much.You are just expressing your feelings :) Keep up the great work!

Very good and very understandable =) Doesn't it suck that something as wonderful as love can hurt so dang bad? =P
I really liked this one =) 5/5
Rhea