Wow!!! This is fantastic, but of course very sad also! It is like the work of someone much older. Well done.

A sweet one yet sad and touching also :) i like the way you write. Amazing poem. Lot of feelings put into it. Keep up the great work!

*sigh* It amazes me just how cruel and painful or first loves can be =P I've come to realize that I didn't actually truly love him but it still hurt because I'd never fallen like that =P Thank god for Lance and his love though lol I'm rambling here lol Sorry xD Another great poem and another 5 =D
Rhea

I like this poem keep up the good work. and the reason i like poem cz i have same thing wit these to guys i like amd they are my beast friends.

Great poem
sad story to it through
to love and not be loved back
soo tragic
hope if it is true
things went your way

Keenan