by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG Apr 14, 2007
category :
Life, society /
about society
Our little homecoming queen, standing on the scale, |
by StandStill
I live this life, to an extent. thanks for portraying the life of an almost freshman |
Great poem incredible emotion perfect flow everything on point you did an exellent job keep it up 5/5 |
by Viola
I LOVE this poem because it screams truth and reality. Things that some people forget to see until it's thrown into their face sometimes. |
That was beautiful, amazing, and truely touching. |
Wow... I'm speechless. I haven't read something so powerful in a while. Whole story behind this poem is so real, I know a lot of people that act at the exact same way, and you put it all in the poem excellently. Whole piece is very deep, and the imagery that you created in it is vivid and captivating. Every line holds a lot of emotions and images, and this is one of those poems that are so hard to forget. |