Good job this is well wirtten better then the one i read before umm i cant remember what it was called though well good job this is a powerful poem lots of spirit and emotion and thx for the comment

keenan

I really liked the imagery in this poem, it wasn't quite dark, but it was definitely eerie. Sends shivers down my spine. Very raw emotion in this poem, and you made it very clear. Good job on this one!

Good job girl.
I felt what you were saying.

'that I loved him with my everything,
That I'm left with nothing,
nothing but his memory '

I think the majority of people can relate to this. Keep it up!
Rebecca

This poem is great. You can see alot of emotion. People can relate to it. well done. 5/5

~Chelsea