by Sydney Apr 14, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
These cuts outside of me |
by Corruption
Great poem |
by Cella Bella
I had to read this one after I read the title. It's a great title lol. The emotion here runs deep. It's definitley where it belongs in "dark" poems. Great flow too. 5/5 |
by Kristi lee
I thought it was great , there was so much emotion surging through it. there were some thing made me think about my friend |
by Alex
Wow really nice and deep. |
by Melpomene
The title caught my eye. I found this to be quite interesting. Your word choice nice and the flow didnt go off track at all. Well done~mel |