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by Linden Apr 14, 2007 category : Fun, humor / other
There are these people I know They come from far away I call them the Randoms And they camped in my head to stay One told me to sing in class One told me to shout Two told me I was crazy So I started to jump about I jumped on a bus and laughed Because the randoms told me a joke The other people around me didn't get it They were all just simple folk No one knows my Randoms like me I can name them by heart. Bob the third, Airlie, Yumch, Jill, Kangaroo and LOL Make up the wonderful bunch Kangaroo and Bob the third are brothers They make the most trouble They tell me to do crazy things That I do on the double Airlie is the worst She's the one that makes me giggle I smile when she is in my mind Sometimes it makes me dribble Yumch and LOL are completely random From lemons to pineapple trees To elevators from llamas Randoms are so good to me Making noises on the stairs People think I'm lost When I go around town In a t-shirt in the frost But then the people with the white jackets came I told them all about my friends The jokes and plans they made But they said it had to come to an end But I broke away and ran off free Because these Randoms told me so They said they would stop them talking And so I should stay down low They found me hiding in a zoo With some kangaroos I was wild and crazy And everyone was confused LEMONS I shouted It was the lemons all along Winding inside my mind Everything was wrong The medicine made me sleep I woke in a hospital bed Everything was silent lemons was all I said A few weeks passed and the lemons went away The doctor said I was fine I was able to go out again With my new best friend, Chine (I had a request for a longer poem! I hope this was long enough. p.s. I'm pretty crazy!)
by Wallace
Not a bad poem, but the flow was off a number of times and the ending wasn't so good. It was creative and Imaginative but needs some more work.
by Miko
Lol! I don't think I"m ever going to stop laughing after I read that!