Just a fool

by BlAcK RoSe   Apr 14, 2007


I loved you so much.
I would have giving you the world.
How could you do this to me.
Make me trust you.
You said i was safe with you.

You lied didnt you.
I wasnt was i.
How could you be so cruel.

Tell me what i did that was so wrong.
Did i care to much.
Clearly i was just a fool.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Gothic Girl in Pain

    Nice poem. But try to make it a little bit longer. And discribe the pain and betraly more. But besides that, it was great. 4/5

  • 17 years ago

    by robin milford

    I recommend makeing this longer by discribeing the betraly more and the pain u know besides that great job.

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