Im normally not all that into dark poems, but I enjoyed that one more than I thought I would. I love the rhyme scheme in it and it made it almost eaier to read. It put a good flow onto the poem.

Very nicely done dave love how u kept it so direct but also had the imagery flowing so well. good on ya (and i remembered to vote as well this time)

Woah mate, another truly great poem! I really enjoyed the desciption of the battle and actions been told. It has this amazonian thing going on but it also has a sort of lost love feel. It is like the dicotomy of what is right and what is decision. 5/5 ... nicely penned....

favourite stanza was:

Armour and shields
Fall deep in the skin
Leave deep, deep scars
Their ambition is to win

Chan
-xx-

Amazing.5/5

Wow. 0.0 you have a knack for writing

I liked how it was a battle to prove love. 5/5 i really liked this line though

"There will be bloodshed today"

love the whole thing, start, middle, end!

Very impressive.
A dark poem indeed, but it was great to read.
Keep it up!

This is amazing. keep up the good work. :)

This poem makes me feel sad...for the loser....='(

Noelle

Awesome poem, very imaginable. I love how you rhymed it and how easily it flowed, gave you a 5! ^_~

Woww.
i loved this one probaly the most. it was powerful and deep.

A cut to the hand
Stabbing of the heart
Stumbling to the ground
His existence falling apart

that stanza was my all time favorite. especially, "his existence is falling apart" part.
i dont think i've read anything like this one before.
Amazing jobb. 5/5.

-Ashlei.

Very well written loved it...