Struggle

by Polly   Apr 14, 2007


I try to keep going, I try to keep breathing,
I try to stay positive and think happy thoughts,
but my wishes of happiness could never come true
- I've fallen in too deep: so harshly I've been caught.

My breath is snatched from within my mouth,
I blink with my eyes, but they're dry of tears.
I think my usual thoughts, feel my usual feelings
My overwhelmed heart is drowned by my fears...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Yes fear and insecurity can get the best of uss short but sweet write

  • 17 years ago

    by ~me~

    AHHHHHHHHHH your really good polly
    i love your writing
    i just want to say
    "thankyou so much for telling me about P&Q"
    if you hadnt i would never of found this place
    and i larve it
    lol i larve you see you monday xxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by CHOKE

    Aweful feeling that shalt be really. stay strong though love. time can mend anything if you give it the chance. 5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    I really liked these two short stanzas. They flowed nicely. loved how the lines were written long. Well done with this. Its a great poem.~mel

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