Losing a friend, taking my life

by isabel   Apr 14, 2007


You were my most precious treasure
Hearing you laugh was a pleasure
Seeing you sad made me cry
I swear that, for you, I'd die

All nice things must end
You are no longer my friend
This loss has taken my breath
Now, I only think of death

Painted black is the sky
Why did you need to lie?
In my reality, there was a twist
Now, I only need to cut my wrist

Your heart is frozen for eternity
In the cemetery, this memory
Awakes the broken and the dead
I died for you, that's what I said

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  • 17 years ago

    by Luis Sousa

    Toss your hope away
    you did never won
    move on
    thats what i say

  • 17 years ago

    by Kalee

    Perfect flow and rhyming. This poem was excelent. It was a great read. 5/5

    Kalee

  • 17 years ago

    by CHOKE

    The rhyming scheme seemed a tad forced to me love. but over all it was still a good read. 4/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by Allison

    This was a lovely read. You did a great job dear. ^.^
    It had a nice flow to it and I loved the rhyme scheme. Keep up the good work. *5/5*

    Alyson

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    Excellent rhythm, the rhymes didn't seem forced at all.
    The topic was so sad though. Losing a friend is something terribly upsetting
    5/5
    *Gem*

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