Excellent rhythm, the rhymes didn't seem forced at all.
The topic was so sad though. Losing a friend is something terribly upsetting
5/5
*Gem*

This was a lovely read. You did a great job dear. ^.^
It had a nice flow to it and I loved the rhyme scheme. Keep up the good work. *5/5*

Alyson

The rhyming scheme seemed a tad forced to me love. but over all it was still a good read. 4/5.

Perfect flow and rhyming. This poem was excelent. It was a great read. 5/5

Kalee

Toss your hope away
you did never won
move on
thats what i say