by Kalee Apr 14, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
Why do I feel this way? |
by Brittany C
Not bad though I do thin kthat it could be better if you were to work on it a little. Keep up the great work. 4/5 |
Aw this poem is so sweet, and yeah thats definatly love.. or it could be a really strong crush im not to sure. Whatever it is.. I really liked the poem idea, VERY creative you got a lot out there without having to say very much. Nice work. |
It could use editing, yes . Was it bad? No . The feeling that is felt in the poem is right there; it speaks to you . I`m not a fan of this poem, but it was good . |
by holly
Pretty, it speaks |
Wow...this is really good poem, but this is how I feel. my opinion is there is no love. yeah...good job. |