by David
Oh its love all right. i know you. and thru this poem i am right in saying it is trully love. |
Okay, I must admit. The poem is a bit messy. You could have you used better structure to your poem. The flow was rocky and it is a fixer upper. It just needs a bit of work. Try to have the closest amount of sylables in each lines. Don't take it seriously, just advice. Other than that, it's a cute poem. I don't really read internet slang, but this was cute. But unfortunatly it's not great, just good, so I'll have to give you a 4/5. |
by MaSkEdSoUl
Yes, my friend, it is love lol. I loved the flow of this and the ending was good, in my opinion. To me its good the way it is. 5/5 |
by CHOKE
Interestin write. |
I've felt this way so many times. Great job at getting your emotions through. It really shows. 5/5 |
by Darien
Hmm, this was more of a sad sort of love poem, sort of like, a confusion. Which is what this poem is about. Being confused about love! I didn't really like the title because it sort of ruined the element of surpised. It was easy to guess what this poem was about. I think you should change the title, and leave the last line to ask the question. It's totally up to you though. Good job on this one though. |
by isabel
Loved this poem... |
by moonlil
Nice poem. |
by amanda flood
Well done very good i agree wit^^^all off them 5-5 |
.. agreed. |
I love is poem I think that it has a great massge to it. I also think that it shows how you my not now if your feelings for someone are ture. |
Wow...this is really good poem, but this is how I feel. my opinion is there is no love. yeah...good job. |
by holly
Pretty, it speaks |
It could use editing, yes . Was it bad? No . The feeling that is felt in the poem is right there; it speaks to you . I`m not a fan of this poem, but it was good . |
Aw this poem is so sweet, and yeah thats definatly love.. or it could be a really strong crush im not to sure. Whatever it is.. I really liked the poem idea, VERY creative you got a lot out there without having to say very much. Nice work. |
by Brittany C
Not bad though I do thin kthat it could be better if you were to work on it a little. Keep up the great work. 4/5 |