How sad ;[ This had a lot of emotion in it, and so much detail. I feel the rhyming was a bit forced at times. The flow was kinda rocky. Your rhyme scheme was a bit.. everywhere. Which made it not flow all-to-well.

she reaches out to god. [God*]

4/5.

I enjoyed how this poem was put together. It is a very good poem. 5/5

Thats so sad. Alot of emotion and great vocab except:

"She's not aloud to leave the house."

I dont think aloud is the word you want to use. Its allowed. Other than that it was well written. Keep it up!!

Wow,this was soo powerful.if this is a real life story,please seek help.i watched my mom go through 3 abusive relationships,its one of the most painful things to have happen.
also,maybe ask god for strenght to go on instead of just straight up helping you.thats what i do when i'm down.
thanks again for commenting.
beautiful poem!
--lexie

Yeah, the flow was rocky on this poem. I didn't quite catch a rhythem. A lot of grammar errors I found. Overall, I did like it. It was a sad and told a terrible story. Unfortunatly the poem was good, not great. God Bless 4/5<-Sorry.
<3Tayyy

The flow was a bit off but overall a good and meaningful but sad poem. keep it up. your a great writer.

Another VERY unique topic accompanied by unique discriptive words. The flow wasn't exactly perfect and some sentances didn't seem to fit the poem. I sugest capatalizing the first letter of a word used after a period.

So much heart ache she's always felt
because of that man.
With every painful welt
He leaves on her skin.
^^^Somthing didn't work there.... I'm not sure what but it was on the third and forth sentance.