I really like the flow of this one. It has good rhyme. It doesn't look like too many people have looked at this one, so I don't think that its a bad poem or anything(obviously not) just not many people have read it XD
Good job :]
--K

Oooh, I love poems about emotions!!! They're so beautiful... like whoaa. Nicely done. =)

I swear Ive read this one too. But either way, GREAT JOB! I like the description of tears...I dont like tears, but they sound exciting when you describe them the way you did!