Cindy ,its beautiful such lovely write.

Sometimes I get so angry
For what was torn from me
Other times I'm thankful
For what was left to see

This stanza is really inspirational, such deep meaning.

Take care
chavii.

Great job, i loved it. :D It is the best poem that I have ever read, it is really deep and meaningful.

~Elizabetta~

Well written and thoughtful....good flow and rhyming...

This is excellent, the flow was amazing and it was asy to understand. Excellent work. Keep it up. Your still on my Fav's.

Sometimes I get so angry
For what was torn from me
Other times I'm thankful
For what was left to see

Only someone like you could give such a beautiful opening, this is really so amazing, beautifully written...perfect blend of pain and hope...loved it.

keep writing sweety, people here are addicted to ur poems now.

all the best and take care

Dear Cindy... thank you for sharing this most heartfelt poem.. I know from my own experiences that putting your feelings down on paper can be so cathartic. I loved it..
tom

Beautifully penned with sadness. Excellent flow. Great job!

Again another wonderful poem. your description was excellent.

5/5 your friend, David

Very beautiful poem Cindy. You know sometimes we get so wrapped up in our lives and feel so many bad emotions that we forget to look at the beauty the world holds and what it has left. I loved this poem and your meaning to it!
Chelsey

A very beautiful piece from start to finish.I so do enjoy reading you work.x

A greta piece expressing your inner emotions, so deep and powerful and you presented it beautifully, no one can fully understand the extent of your words until its lived well done cindy great poem.

"Yet often times I smile
When hearing the birds sing
Feeling the warmth of the sun
The happiness that it brings"

That stanza simply made my day. =]
A wonderful piece of heartwarming poetry you have here, Ms. Cindy. It never failed to amaze me through its noteworthy message. Keep on writing what you feel and like. all the best and take care.
Love,
Debbie

Another great poem with so much feeling. Keep writing.

Aww what a beautiful poem, sad in a way but the meaning was very nice, your emotions just pour out on poems like this and that is truly amazing to understand what the poet is feeling. Great job Cindy!!

I love this poem so much, it is awesome, exactly what i wanted to hear. thanks, u made my day.

I wish I could somehow give it all back to you. I know how hard life is for you...yet you always have a smile for us everyday. You have faced all the challenges life has given you with strength and courage. You are a great insperation for all of us your family. You don't know how much you mean to us all. This was a wonderful poem. Wish you could see the wonderful woman that we see. Love you.

Written from expirence a excellent write. 5/5 from me

Great poem, like your style of writing, hope to read more, thanks ,,Tracy

It is sad but wonderful. I can feel it.

Hi cindy, love this poem , really moving ,and touching to (Looking out this window
Everyday for many years
Brought some precious smiles
With a multitude of tears) can feel your thoughts
thanks for the poem, great job sweetie, Tracy