Lol!

Oh, wow, that was really good. I had no idea it was your mother till the end. This was my favorite part: I remember her ruler
It was ten feet long
She looked so scary
Worst than King Kong

Lmao very funny

LMAO! hahahaha lol
that was very funny!
Great job!

It's hilarious one part needs work tho
Her homework was hard
She gave us long division
And then multiplication
And then subtraction
... it doesnt seem to flow with the rest of it in rhythm.. other than that it's amazing... it's very rare you find a funny poem that's actually good but you did it!

HAHA! Talk about a surprise ending. I liked that, every child hates their teachers and the work they give out but it just made the poem that much greater that it was about your Mother. ^_^

5.5

That really made me smile..i liked so much...

That was great man, this is the first funny poem Ive read that I liked alot and the ending was PERFECT...
Ye I guess we all hate our teachers...

Take Care and keep on with the funny stuff

Wow wow wow, all the time i couldnt stop laughing and then in the end i was so surprised and still couldnt stop laughing...great one....no matter how far we all are but the intentions for teachers are same worlwide... :o))))

all the best and take care

Yes the end got me too. It was so funny as I read along.
Great job.

Ha ha ha, this was a great poem. Original and funny, it sounds exactly like a picture book!

That was funny and very well written ,well done !!

Oh wow i love the twist at the end well done this is an excellently wrtten poem, well done indeed (and you said you weren't good pish posh hehe) xox lithium

That was so funny smile, she was my mother jeez id hate my mum to teach at my school let alone my class 5/5 kiara

Haha that was hilarous, i like how you made it very sedutive, like in a way, up to the punch line. very unique

Ahhh! lmao omg i can't believe the twist on the end, that the teacher was the mom!! lol omg this made me laugh, cute poem! i loved the stanza---

I remember this teacher
She was cold and mean
Her breath was horrible
She needed some Listerine

lol great job!

This poem was halarious!! You did a real good job. I cracked up laughin and choked while drinking my water. Good Job.

OMG!!! Thats soooo cute! The ending caight me off guard!! REAL CUTE!!!!

"I remember this teacher
She was cold and mean
Her breath was horrible
She needed some Listerine"

Lmao!! That was priceless!! Completely priceless!!
I loved the twist at the end! Excellent poem!
5/5
*Gem*

Nicely written.....so cute and funny! All the best, Debbie