by MaSkEdSoUl Apr 14, 2007
category :
Fun, humor /
other
It comes in all sizes |
by Imani
DAMN u had me thinking lolz |
by Lori Lee
I liked it. lol. 5/5 |
by Vanessa
Cute read. Flow was a little off, but nicely written. keep it up, you will only get betterin time.Good job. |
Haha this is cute. up until you said it was gum, i wasnt sure what it was going to be about! |
by Debbie
'Twas a cute write. If I may suggest, maybe applying a specific metre and/or rhyme scheme will enhance the poem's flow? =] |