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Thought it was great, loved it.
Again so full of emotion in those short lines. Also the pace of it worked really well.
I was thinking summet along the lines of
'The cravings of a silenced soul'
or
'Cry of the broken heart'
or
'The silent screams of the lost'
just a few suggetions,
and again you know that I'm just the other end of an email if you wana chat...
keep up these great poems, and hope life looks up for u, be great to read some cheerfull poems fro you.
def 5/5
take care
-Black night-

Hey broken,

say that's really depressing poem. hope it doesn't reflect your life in anyways...i pray.

You could name it...Set me free. I have a similar poem named ..cry for help.

Would like to see a happy poem from you.

§Neo§