I Don't Love You [Rondel]

I pride myself on the truth; I Don't Love You.
Broken hearts aren't for me anymore!
Why would I care when you just choose to ignore?
Awe, you poor thing! What are you to do?!

Without me now, you're lost and you're screwed.
What did you think, I was some kind of chore?
I pride myself on the truth; I Don't Love You.
Broken hearts aren't for me anymore!

So stand there and watch as I bid my final adieu-
And as you continue to fall, watch as I soar.
Just to think, you used to be the boy I adored.
I'll move on; I'll find someone new.
I pride myself on the truth; I Don't Love You.

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Rondel:
A French form consisting of 13 lines: two quatrains and a quintet, rhyming as follows: ABba abAB abbaA. The capital letters are the refrains, or repeats.

I Don't Love You; By: Ciao - Some of it was a little off, and some of it was right on to what I was looking for. You have a way, with your poetry and your words, to captivate a reader and pull them into the story as if they can see it all happening. And in this one, that part was just a tad off. You did a great job as always, don't get me wrong..but you needed to use just a little more imagery. But, I loved it still. =) Heartchuu.
GRAMMAR - 4.5/5
SPELLING 3/3
CONTENT 4.5/5
FLOW 4.5/5
ABILITY TO FOLLOW TYPE OF POETRY - 2/2
TOTAL 18.5/20