Trust

by heather   Apr 12, 2004


Why did you call me a that name I only said how I felt. i trusted you and you turned and stabbed me in the back. You know what I have tried and i just gave up on trying. You had no right calling me a loser. i guess thats all part of life. Thats OK i got over it i survived. Just remember that I trusted you.

this poem may not be great but i tried i was having a rough time concentrating. please comment

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  • 20 years ago

    by gasping for air

    its pretty good, i like the topic, cuz i can relate..... its good, again I think if you elaborate you can make it better, but if you couldn't focus very well then its all good.... Personally I think that if you can do this good and you're not focusing as well then I can't wait until the day that you can totally focus... those'll be some awesome poems! I love your poetry it's awesome.... keep it up!

  • 20 years ago

    by >> Beautifully Mistaken

    hey, this is realli gud, keep up the gr8 work! i luv readin ur poems!