I always loved that analogy, life as a book. It's very true though, each chapter is a different stage of your life, with ups and downs and such. This is a very good poem, and it gets people thinking. Good job on this one!

You are very gifted

I like this poem alot it has a deeper meaning as you said you thought it would ...5/5

HOT DAMN!!! Where have you been on my life!!! HAHAHAHAHA I LOVE THIS!!!!!! What a wonderful write. I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT!!!! Nicely done!!!!

I loved how you described this poem as being spontaneous yet it still seems to have this deep understanding behind it. i think it is a really original poem with such fluency, great job

Great Job!

Very nicley written