Bryan
Nice job on the collab...aren't they great :) I love the meshing of the two styles.

She's my angel, my heart, and all my love,
Such a beautiful blessing sent from above.
Like blossoms blooming in the middle of spring,
My heart leaps with joy from the love that she brings.

This was my favorite stanza. It just sounded so natural.
Take care your friend Cindy

Hehe.. Aww Bryan, we did well on this one... =] glad to work with ya babe!

xxCiaoxx

This is too sweet, I nearly have tooth decay reading this piece. =]] Hahaha. On the whole, both of you have written a rather beautiful piece of collab. poetry. It never failed to enthrall me in the least sense. Keep on writing what you feel and like. all the best and take care.
Love,
Debbie cakes

This poem is perfect nothing less than perfect...amazing

This is an awesome poem at first i was like uhh okay because it was talking about a guy but then i read on and understood it more lol good job

ps what is collab??

keenan

Collab is two poets working on it together and this is the sweetest love poem I have read in a long time. excellent job

Bravo. *stands and applaudes* That was fantastic!!! So sweet, so full of love. Great work from the both of you!!!

5/5

Josie