by Darien Apr 15, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
When You Are Here |
by noha
Still great good jop |
by Samantha
That was great really sweet. |
Yet again another wonderfully written poem by a great poet. I loved the flow and your word choice. Great Job. |
Aww.. this is adorable.. the description if wonderful and you really let the reader know how you feel.. all in all you just chose the perferct jumble of words to create this poem... the ending was strong without overpowering the rest of the poem.. a very enjoyable read.. great job :D |
by Startle Me
You explain your style in this poem. |