Cold and still so soft

I love this poem it's the best poem i have read on her so far ur really good hunnie keep it up!!!!

I really liked this one, a lot.

"i miss you so far
and the collision of your kiss
and all of the silent smiles
that let me in on this"

that by far, was my favorite line.

keep it up love!

Very good poem, I really liked it, A very good flow and well written. This verse really standed out to me though;

i fall around your ghost
as it unwraps my fears
sinking slowly into you
and the whispers in my ears

Good lines, great job, looking forward to more of you're poems.