by Debbie Apr 15, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
The sound of his voice reverberates, |
Great poem amazingly written and very heartfelt write, full of sad emotions, the word choice was very nice , you did a wonderful job on this piece, keep it up, your friend Tracy d.............5/5 |
by Angela
Omg!!!! i was in tears as it is reading this poem, beacuase i recently went though this... but then at the end of the poem when you said her name was jennifer!?!? omg!!!... thats the name of the girl who mine liked/likes... i can really realate to this poem and its story, and the feeling of it... and then her name!! lol, i almost crapped myself when i saw it :P |
by Corruption
Wow even the first poems you wrote are amazing lol wow good job!! you are an amazing writer. i think your gonna make it big one day lol dont forget us little people btw lol good job and thx for the comment |
This is a very nice poem. Extremely heartfelt and emotional. You almost made me cry... I like how you compare people's voices to music. "Listen in his heartbeat, hear its symphony. |