Comments : Letting Go... [Acrostic]

  • 17 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Nice poem nice flow 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

  • 17 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    Poetry doesn't need a rhyme to make a good poem, I know.
    But being as your poem rhymed through out the whole poem except ;
    "To witness the stars in her eyes darkling,
    To listen to the whispers of her heart drifting"
    It sorta threw off the flow.

    Also I don't know if [darkling] is the correct word for this.

    But other than that it was an excellent poem. =]
    It may be in the sad section but its full of hope.
    Well done. :]

  • 17 years ago

    by Birgit

    You didn't only make an Acrostic (like that isn;t hard enough) You also made it rhyme very nicely =] Like it! =]

    Keep smiling <3