by Debbie Apr 15, 2007
category :
Life, society /
faith, religion
Wastes already decayed, |
by Corruption
Good job different from your other poems yet you still did a fantastic job on it good job |
by Melpomene
For a short poem this piece flowed beautifully i love the description you put into this poem it was really well done. Good title for it caught my eye. ~mel |
I love the way this relates to current events. You have great vocabulary throughut the poem, though it is short. I like the flow and the topic you've chosen. |