by aDORKable x3 Apr 15, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
A black and white photograph, laying in the drawer- |
by Jenni Marie
I have tears in my eyes... |
OMG Ciao... that made me cry, omg.. that was an amazing work of art... *wipes tears* Oh... that is so emotional and overwhelming, yet the message is so clear.. oh jeeze... It was amazing!! Flow and word choice were superb as well... it deserves WAY more than a 5/5 <3 |
by Espoirfailed
This poem was so amazing, it seemed to flow. i like how it was about a war death yet you focused on the person left behind and a photograph, it was a different take to the subject, very original poetry. |
by Nicole
5/5 excellent poem. the emotion and the way it depicts a story that you can see is amazing. well done. keep writing |
by CHOKE
Btw, this poem was so good that im going to vote for it for the weekly contest. thanks for writing it :D |