Honey! I got shivers..I love this, I really like the war-ish poems haha, they really get to me, and this one did too! I'm working on another soldier poem, and this inspired me to stop commenting on everyones poems out of boredom and get on with my writing hahaa. I love you and you are so talented Dear, NEVER stop writing.

heartchuu.

I almost broke into tears. this was a very well written poem love.

Btw, this poem was so good that im going to vote for it for the weekly contest. thanks for writing it :D

5/5 excellent poem. the emotion and the way it depicts a story that you can see is amazing. well done. keep writing

This poem was so amazing, it seemed to flow. i like how it was about a war death yet you focused on the person left behind and a photograph, it was a different take to the subject, very original poetry.

OMG Ciao... that made me cry, omg.. that was an amazing work of art... *wipes tears* Oh... that is so emotional and overwhelming, yet the message is so clear.. oh jeeze... It was amazing!! Flow and word choice were superb as well... it deserves WAY more than a 5/5 <3

Much Love,
.:Danielle:.

I have tears in my eyes...
This is so heartbreaking and yet at the same time it is written so elegantly.
Flow, once again is flawless, and I loved the imagery used in this one.
I think you outdid yourself with this!