Great poem. Interesting topic. Just on thing: whether talikng about one devil or many devils, there should be an apostrophe when talking about things that are theirs. For instance "In the devils wake". if one devil "in the devil's wake". If more "in the devils' wake". It just like you have for "children's laughter".

Anyway, good work...

Josie

Nice dark poem ^^ i remember writing something somewhat like that. it flowed nicely good job 5/5