Baby Grand [Monorhyme]

This is a great poem i dont think i could do this kind of poem, im not good with rhymes so yeah lol good job and thx for the comment i fixed that mistake btw lol thx

keenan

Wow Debbie, this is nice and a cool poem. The rhymes are really catching. The monorhymic scheme is beautiful and I love this style of writing. The poem flows well and rhymes very well. It also reflects your creativity and lexical power. Max ratings for sure.

Her fingers delicately pluck each key with grace,
Eyes closed for long, seeing only empty space.
Her soul is seeking, unguided thoughts to trace,
Melodious music drifts like a child in warm embrace.
Forsooth this song of glee in harmonious pace!
Still middling, unmoved is her lovely face,

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Tc

I'm not usually a fan of monorhymes because they seem elementary.. but they are wicked hard cuz u have to find a LOT of words that rhyme together lol... so i respect you for it.. spentacular job all things in consideration.

Hey,
nice poem, i haven't read this typ of poem yet so this is new for me..=)
anyway love it.. i like the words you used in the poem..5/5
kisses stephanie