Oh wow! that was quite horrible really, not the poem but the story. you know? a tad sad over that one love. not the best thing to hear, but it happens. 5/5.

Interesting Jenna... I don't know what else to say... Good job though! lol

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Oh OH Djskjsarghegjfksmi`agkeghjnJAMU~UIFKg that is a horrible HORRIBLE way of putting it. it's almost sadistic. but i like people who rhyme on every paragraph. so it was a good poem.
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Excellent poem superbly done. It was a joy to read from start to finish, love it, keep it up.

Wow.
A very emotional write.... & It tells a truly heart breaking story... You're a very creative writer, keep it up! 5.5

Stephanie Lynn .+.

Oh.em.gee.
girl knows how to write.
i'll give you that. =/.

4.8/5

Your grandad dogged you? that's sickening.
i hate this :|

L.x

This was a very touching poem. I was able to picture each scene as if I were there. You have a special way of getting your point across. I look forward to reading more of your work, when I have more time of course. Keep up the excellent work.

Extraordinary, what a fantastic poem, i was gripped. Real good job xx

It put alot of imagery in my head...its very sad though..and kinda disturbing to think about..but excellent poem!

Wow, all I can say.

Very good dear =]

Wonderful poem, deep, and saddening.

Nothing more to say =]
5/5

~sdpw