Sad but really good. I really liked it and felt a lot of emotions coming from it.

Oh... my gosh... i am so sorry that was soo sad... wow.. i'm going to add you on my faves... all your poems are good! but man... that's just messed up!

p.s: thank you for commenting on mines... i really appreciate it.

This poem is really sad but really really good. You could tell you put a lot of emotion into it. 5/5

Kalee

Very powerful poem!.. This is your story, but it is always different from someone elses. It may sound the same, but it never really is. I loved the choice of words, and I really liked the title. Life is full of love and pain, and well, love and pain do go hand-in-hand at times. There are good days though. There always is. Otherwise, you would never know what a bad day was.

Keep your head up hun,
Life is still full of surprises.

Hey
so sad:(, im sorry..
i hope everything is better nowadays,

i absolutely love this poem, It was like i could see it happening in front of my eyes..so sad :(
i have put you in my favorites and I'm going to read some more of you poems.
kisses stephanie

Wow! What a poem, filled with emotion.. the flow was a little off, but it didn't really effect the way of the poem.. I really appreciate you nomintaing my poem for the Weekly Contest. =] Much Love... 5/5

Ciao~

Sad, but amazing...

*isabel*

Wow. Very deep, moving, and powerful. Very sad. You convey emotion nicely.

I like this, i cant really relate to it, becouse i was never abused by my parents as a child. well written and very emotional, but the rhyme scheme seems to be there in parts but not in others. if intentional then i like it. i dont like poems that rhyme just for the sake of rhyming.. great work (:

Awhh this is really sad and it almost made me cry:[ im really sorry if this happened to you. but it was a wonderfully written poem and it def. gets a 5/5 from me.

Wow there was a lot of emotion in this poem. Very sad, great flow, except there were times where it didnt quite go too good but overall its a great piece. 5/5

This was a good poem some of the lines felt forced and there wasnt as much emotion in it as i would have expected for ive been abused too but it was overall a great poem

Well-done. but sad.

Oh my god I think this is the first poem that has ever brought me to tears Lol! damn! What can I say I'd take the beatings for my little sister to!

Wow very powerful and amazing use of words...you got talent gurl!! haha =o]

Your poem touched the tenderest and most delicate emotions that I have in my heart.

In plain English, this was good. :)

Hope to read more from you, and thanks for commenting on my poems as well.

-Franklin

I'm glad you used the word survivor because that is exactly what you are. so sorry you had to go through this. xoxo

Wow, this is so sad, but it is really good... it has so much emotion, and it brought tears to my eyes. Its so sad, and I feel bad for liking the poem, even though it was so full of pain... I loved it...
5/5

Powerful. moving. inspirational.
to just say... this was a lovely piece of writing.
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i wish i could rate higher. but i cant.
5/5

I really liked this poem alot the flow was great and the message was really good. I loved the way you drew your reader into the whole picture great job Plot121